Entry16

     I have already finished my final draft!! It is really a tough project! The main problem I worked out was the citation. To be honest, I had many citations about the definition and background. So it spent me much time to correcting them. However, after using the formal format to correct citations one by one, they looked more clear and specific. Another difficult problem was about the transitions. As Dr. Jennifer said in the class, “audience is robot.” I had to explain my idea more specifically and add transitions, which I originally thought was unnecessary. In addition, I also checked my work cited carefully. Through revising the draft again and again, my writing skill has improved a lot.