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   I have already finished my second draft. Based on the previous research outline, what I had done was to expand my idea, give a more detailed explanation, and write the smooth transitions. I had faced some difficulties in the detailed explanation of some examples. For me, these example were easy to understand, but not for the audience. So I should also pay attention to some details, that the audience might feel confused. However, the 12-page research paper has been done, but it was not really finished. My next step is to revise my second paper for at least three times, and find as many mistakes as possible.